Poetic rhythm, rhyme and verse?
21 Mar 2025
Dear LPG
I have always been interested in writing, but while the idea of starting a book at my stage of life might excite some, I find it a little unrealistic. I have had the odd go at producing a verse or two of poetry, although I have never managed to write one that I have thought was good enough for anyone to see but me. I have real problems making them sound metered or even getting them to rhyme, which usually puts me off.
There have been times when I feel inspired, and what I want the poem to convey is right there in my head, but I need help to get the words to rhyme while keeping the sense of the thing, and it all results in a lot of screwed-up paper.
I have always known that only some poems have to rhyme conventionally. Many poem formats don’t have to rhyme at all. With this idea in my head, I recently tried to find out a little more about some of the non-rhyming formats and armed with that knowledge, I put pen to paper yet again…
Having read about ‘Free verse’, I came up with this…
I am getting older…
I am getting older.
My knees keep telling me so.
Not with words
But every time I get up.
They warn me that I might not.
Manage it successfully.
Next time
That came from the heart, but if I had just read it, interesting though I might have found it, would it count as a poem in my mind? I did question its validity as an actual poem, so I had a go at a limerick.
The young lady from Bath
There was a young lady from Bath.
Who, when she smiled, looked quite daft.
She smiled at me one day.
But I had nothing to say.
I could not help it; I just laughed.
That is enough poetic thinking for one day, but I found a list of formats that might help any aspiring poet who has not started yet…
SD, Deptford
…and LPG adds some information on today’s celebration…
…and LPG adds some information on today’s celebration…